1.I hate to sound like a nitpicker, but I found a comma missing in your third paragraph and another comma missing down in the tenth paragraph.
我很讨厌听起来好像是在挑剔。但是我发现你文章的第三段里少了一个逗号，在第十段里也少了一个逗号。
2.I hate to sound like a nitpicker, but I found a comma missing in your third paragraph and another comma missing down in the tenth paragraph.
我很讨厌听起来好像是在挑剔。但是我发现你文章的第三段里少了一个逗号，在第十段里也少了一个逗号。
3.The nitpicker who criticizes her is her best friend Laura.
唯一批评她的是她的好朋友劳拉。